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Wednesday 17th February 2010 16:50 | Out of the Darkness | And we will just have to wait until you want to reveal why Verity needed an exclamation point in
"A lady!" exclaimed Verity. | | Thursday 18th February 2010 07:05 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) | | Thanks! You are good to bring up points I didn't think of. I kind of assumed it was just surprising to her that a lady might come and visit George. But apparently not that obvious...LOL! | Arnel
Wednesday 17th February 2010 13:38 | Out of the Darkness | ...And life goes on. This is a nice chapter, although I have a feeling Harry is kicking himself for missing Ron and Hermione's departure. Well, that can't be helped. I agree with Ginny that Harry did a good thing by having her stay for one last meal at The Burrow. But you know, as soon as Ginny sets foot in her new place, things will be so busy for her that she won't have time to feel sad or sorry for herself because she's off on her own next life's big adventure. I just hope she remembers to write home...
| | Thursday 18th February 2010 07:03 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) | | Thanks for the review! I hadn't thought about Ginny writing home...mostly because I was planning on having her family at games and such...but letters would nit be uncalled for. Good idea! | guruvee
Wednesday 17th February 2010 12:23 | Out of the Darkness | | Thanks for the review! And I will do that...with the previous chapter summaries. Thanks for the idea. | ngayonatkailanman
Wednesday 17th February 2010 11:15 | Out of the Darkness | Yay! An update! What a pleasant surprise.
I do understand about research so could I make a suggestion? It would be a good idea if you will give a very brief summary of the previous chapter before you start the actual chapter just so your readers will pick up the story where you left off and will not need to keep going back to remind themselves of what happened before.
As for this chapter.... you are so .... naughty. You had to leave a cliffhanger for us to guess. Sigh.... Angelina?
What a most unusual and very realistic way of saying goodbyes and starting new lives. | | Wednesday 17th February 2010 12:24 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) | Thanks for the review! And I will do that...with the previous chapter summaries. Thanks for the idea.
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