Patches
Saturday 5th February 2011 22:05 | Out of the Darkness |
| This is a really good story. I am sorry I didn't get around to this one sooner. I really like where you are going. I hope you continue. Very well thought out and I like the way you start and end scenes. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more! p |
| Saturday 5th February 2011 22:29 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much! It's been a while since I wrote on this story, but the plot bunnies are constantly making notes. I have every intention of finishing this one. I'm so glad you like it!!! |
bleeblahblee
Monday 5th April 2010 08:01 | Out of the Darkness |
| Nice ending, hope there's more coming. If so I'll certainly be reading it! |
| Monday 5th April 2010 20:27 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing! This story is definitely not over! I am working on the next chapter, so stay posted!!! |
sbmcneil
Wednesday 24th March 2010 15:29 | Out of the Darkness |
| I'm really enjoying your story! Can't wait to see what trouble Ron & Hermione get into in America |
| Wednesday 24th March 2010 18:17 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing! The trip to Salem is where I'm getting tripped up a bit. But we should see part of their visit soon! |
winslow
Monday 22nd March 2010 14:15 | Out of the Darkness |
| Well, now I am hooked on this story! I also like that you are so careful to credit "Ladybug" for being so helpful. Your stories are really well written! I am on pins and needles to see where this adventure takes us! Thank you for your continuing efforts! |
| Monday 22nd March 2010 20:57 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Ah! It seems you have found this one! I am so glad! I am hoping this adventure will go long and far, so stick with me and have faith. I don't like to leave things unfinished. It might take me a while, but it WILL get finished!!! |
Dad
Tuesday 2nd March 2010 10:49 | Out of the Darkness |
At first I thought this story was a bit slow and lacking in action, but I must say, it is steadily growing on me. You have a nice style.
Onwards and upwards. |
| Tuesday 2nd March 2010 20:16 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Oh I am so glad it's growing on you. It is a bit slow. (As are the updates ) It should pick up some over the next few chapters. |
KateB
Tuesday 2nd March 2010 10:33 | Out of the Darkness |
Oh, I was so happy to see this updated! I particularly like how you are showing the good and scary parts of leaving home to be on your own (not to mention Ginny forgetting she'd need furniture!), the healing process George is going through (the conversation every morning is lovely--perhaps Hermione can figure out how to do a portrait of Fred for him??)
I can't wait to see how you resolve things for Ron and Hermione, do they figure out what is wrong soon? Thank you for a really fun chapter, and I can't wait to read more! |
| Tuesday 2nd March 2010 20:14 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much for the review! Ron and Hermione will figure things out. Don't expect it to be soon, though. They need to get through their vacation. That could take a few chapters. |
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 2nd March 2010 00:04 | Out of the Darkness |
The summary was a master stroke. The reminder of what had happened made it possible to appreciate the chapter even more.
Your descriptions are vivid and add greatly to my enjoyment of the story. Harry is a love.
What Harry had done to make her feel at home was so touching, so beautiful. |
| Tuesday 2nd March 2010 01:35 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your review! I think I will include a short summary from now on, and I'm so glad you are seeing the Harry that I see!!! |
ngayonatkailanman
Monday 1st March 2010 20:13 | Out of the Darkness |
How very sweet of you to put a summary. That really added to my enjoyment of the story because then I went straight to the update and the storyline flowed so smoothly. I felt an instant connection as if I was reading the entire story from beginning to end without any break.
Waies is indeed beautiful and I will not be surprised if the Muggle taverns would be as lovely as the wizarding one close to the stadium.
Are there any Harry boyfriends around who furnish rented accommodations for girlfriends or wives? LOL.
Excellent idea to bring together George and Lee and to have Angelina pop in. |
| Tuesday 2nd March 2010 01:34 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thank you so very much! I'm glad the summary served its purpose, and was able to refresh your memory of the story. There is definitely more coming soon! |
Arnel
Monday 1st March 2010 07:39 | Out of the Darkness |
Another fine chapter! I'm glad Harry's so attentive to Ginny's needs, especially finding her a wateringhole where she can go if she wants company. I also find it quite endearing that she found him snoring on the couch he'd conjured... a typical parking spot for the sleepy male... now all she needs to get is a Muggle telly complete with channel flipper and the picture will be complete! As for George and Angelina, I'm very glad she summoned up the courage to go see him. I think her presence will help his recovery.
Thanks for submitting this delightful addition to the story. |
| Tuesday 2nd March 2010 01:16 | Out of the Darkness (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for your review! After being the hero of the wizarding world, I am trying to make Harry a real "guy" and your review tells me that I have managed to achieve that. Perhaps I will have Ginny bestow the gift of a Muggle telly on him! |
