amyd
Thursday 6th May 2010 08:43 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Please keep writing this, ignore any haters, cos I'm loving it and totally intrigued and would love to see what'll happen next |
| Thursday 6th May 2010 14:45 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the encouragement. I don't think I have any haters, just people who find that the story is not their cup of tea. |
potternut190
Tuesday 4th May 2010 12:45 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Glad to see you have returned to the story! The A of AU can shake things up but that's the point. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| Wednesday 5th May 2010 13:33 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| Glad you're reading it and hopefully I'll have a new chapter fully beta'd soon. |
MAJproblem
Friday 30th April 2010 07:08 | The Sins of the Fathers |
Hey Great story. I can't wait to find out how Harry and Ginny come together. Even though he is in Slytherin, I wouldn't put it past Harry to start loosing his magic so as not to force Ginny to love him. Keep writing I like your ideas and where your stories go.
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| Friday 30th April 2010 11:47 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Glad to have you on board as a reader and I feel honoured to be the subject of your first review.
Interesting point you make about Harry being Harry despite being a Slytherin
Once again, thanks for popping round and reading and reviewing. |
JestrBob
Wednesday 28th April 2010 06:22 | The Sins of the Fathers |
An Interesting and thoughtful Fic. Considered everything, I suspect it would be difficult to write. I think I will look forward to this continuation.
Have fun with it. I will enjoy reading it. |
| Wednesday 28th April 2010 12:03 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
It is a difficult fic to write, but thought provoking nonetheless.
Thanks for for reading and reviewing. |
sbmcneil
Tuesday 27th April 2010 01:04 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Very interesting story. I like your versions of Harry and Ginny and find your take on the wizarding world very interesting. Harry's attitudes are intriguing (a husband's job to discipline his wife) and I can't wait to see how a relationship might change that. |
| Tuesday 27th April 2010 13:06 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Harry's views come from his 'Aunt' Bella who is a pureblood's pureblood despite her 'redeemed' status.
In terms of how things develop, I see it as a form of Character Isostatic Adjustment with the next chapter proving pivotal.
Thanks again your review. |
wluer96
Monday 26th April 2010 08:38 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Very happy to see you back. I love this AU. Your versions of Harry and Ginny are intriguing to say the least. Thanks so much! |
aimless`
Sunday 25th April 2010 15:58 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| wow it's back |
| Sunday 25th April 2010 17:17 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| By Jove! You're right! |
Hot48cricket
Saturday 24th April 2010 23:44 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Yeah! A new chapter! So glad to see you are writing again...I really enjoyed this chapter and the insights into both Harry and Ginny. I look forward to the next installment! |
| Sunday 25th April 2010 08:20 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| There's more insights to come. Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the next instalment. |
kiddo
Saturday 24th April 2010 08:04 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Great story, I like your style of writing. |
| Sunday 25th April 2010 08:18 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| thanks for dropping by, I hope you keep on enjoying it. |
bookworm08
Saturday 24th April 2010 05:30 | The Sins of the Fathers |
"Harry concealed his repugnance easily"
The correct sentence should read: "Harry concealed the repugnance he felt for Snape easily." As it stands, the subject of the sentence is Harry, which is somewhat problematic when "repugnance" refers normally to the state of being repugnant, not the feeling of finding someone else repugnant.
For example:
Please try to restrain yourself to sexism OR grammatical vagaries of construction, or I will not continue reading, what has been, up till now, and interesting, although more than slightly repugnant, scenario. |
| Saturday 24th April 2010 06:06 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
"Harry concealed his repugnance easily"
The correct sentence should read: "Harry concealed the repugnance he felt for Snape easily." As it stands, the subject of the sentence is Harry, which is somewhat problematic when "repugnance" refers normally to the state of being repugnant, not the feeling of finding someone else repugnant.
For example:
Please try to restrain yourself to sexism OR grammatical vagaries of construction, or I will not continue reading, what has been, up till now, and interesting, although more than slightly repugnant, scenario.
Shouldn't that be restrain from?
I just wanted to check that you understood that it is okay to write characters with objectionable views e.g. Voldie and co. This Harry is, in his current form, more than 'slightly repugnant'. I find it interesting that you comment about sexism and not homophobia.
To save you a lot of hassle, I would advise you to give up now because, based on your remarks, you're going to hate the next chapter. Really, you are. |
Patches
Saturday 24th April 2010 04:55 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Wow! This is heavy. Their actions are following a prescribed courship but their emotions are off the scale. I look forward to more of this story. I have looked for more for a long time and I am very glad you have chosen to continue. Thank you for writing. A fan. p |
| Saturday 24th April 2010 06:08 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Thanks for sticking with it
Things get worse before they get better but that's only one chapter more. |
Dad
Saturday 24th April 2010 04:47 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Great stuff. I like "don't mess with me" Harry Potters. |
| Saturday 24th April 2010 06:09 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
I'd add overpowered and immature to that.
Glad you like it, I know it's not everyone's cup of tea. |
saulick
Saturday 24th April 2010 00:19 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Glad to see you back at this story here. I thought it showed a lot of promise as a truly solid AU story when it first appeared. I look forward to seeing what is to come. |
| Saturday 24th April 2010 06:11 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reviewing and I hope you don't get scared off by what's to come. |
