DukeBrymin
Thursday 14th April 2011 22:26 | The Sins of the Fathers |
I figure it's the mark of a good author to take someone like Harry, and imbue him with such a proper and stilted way of interacting. Kudos to Ginny for seeing past it to the little boy inside.
And I don't usually hate Sirius (although you did a good job with him in On the Seventh Day), but he's really chapping my hide right about now. |
Siroscariam
Saturday 18th December 2010 20:10 | The Sins of the Fathers |
When will the next chapter come out?
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| Sunday 19th December 2010 07:14 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
When will the next chapter come out?
Its with betas so its really driven by them. Given they have families and Christmas is coming it isn't going to be very soon, sorry. On the plus side, I'm now working on the penultimate chapter.
Thanks for stopping by.
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BookRose
Monday 16th August 2010 20:01 | The Sins of the Fathers |
Wow, I really can't stand Ron.
Hopefully his comeuppance is coming soon. |
ottavia
Tuesday 10th August 2010 15:58 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Lately I don't read much Harry Potter fic but yours is one of the few that I stil follow. I like to see a different Harry and I'm always excited when I see a new chapter |
Comet Moon
Tuesday 10th August 2010 11:54 | The Sins of the Fathers |
You'll never get rid of all the Idiots.
My veiw, If you don't like it, don't read it. Bad mouthing is just insulting, and damaging to the writer.
I like your story (mostly).
Werll written, mysterious. Bit of romance to throw in there.
Though, wondering on the plot with the mysterious () Aura that Ginny met on the train. He's going to pay for that one I bet.
Characters OC? AU people.
LFTM
Ja ne
Jim |
| Tuesday 10th August 2010 15:25 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Only Mostly? You SIYE types !
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dharry
Tuesday 10th August 2010 06:57 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| if I were Harry I would have hit Sirius |
| Tuesday 10th August 2010 15:26 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Me too, but he has decided to stay for one very grogeous reason
Thanks for stopping by. |
Patches
Tuesday 10th August 2010 01:16 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| I don't like this. To limit Harry's magical ablities is setting him up for more danger. He did nothing wrong and the ones that did are not punnished. I hope he does ask Ginny soon and that this can be solved. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p |
| Tuesday 10th August 2010 15:29 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
In some ways they are right; Harry could have got out of the fight very quickly. But he didn't start it and he shouldn't be punished, but when did Hogwarts' punishments start being fair?
Thanks for the review. |
saulick
Monday 9th August 2010 11:50 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Hmm, hints of something a little deeper going on. I can\'t wait to see Ginevra\'s response to the proposal. Good story, keep it up! |
| Tuesday 10th August 2010 15:31 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
There's always something deeper going on, the question is hwt?
The next chapter has what I think you're looking for. |
E.A.Butler
Monday 9th August 2010 11:49 | The Sins of the Fathers |
No offence but...I think it's pretty crap.The only character that acts IN character is Snape. Snape for Merlin's sake SNAPE.
is evil
No offence meant to you or anything. |
| Monday 9th August 2010 12:53 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Thanks for proving me wrong- I thought I'd got rid of all the idiots here.
Welcome to AU where things are different to the books, where authors put their twist on the Potterverse and those at the shallow end of the gene pool get to parade their ignorance.
No offence meant to you or anything. |
potternut190
Monday 9th August 2010 11:24 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Keep up the good work! |
| Tuesday 10th August 2010 15:32 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
Dad
Monday 9th August 2010 09:06 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Intriguing conversation at the end there. |
| Tuesday 10th August 2010 15:32 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Yes, very intriguing. Wonder if we'll ever find out?
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
