paladin
Sunday 26th September 2010 07:46 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice |
This was a great chapter, with great rolling-wave pace. The points of high suspense as Ginny was in flight were full of tense moments. The relaxing points in between balanced the chapter nicely. A well thought out trip for Ginny from home to London. I really enjoyed the fact that you have given Ginny insight into Adam's life before Hogwarts and their meeting. One thing we all suffer from in life, is not being able to 'truly' empathize with another person's struggles. I'm looking forward to how the pair move forward together, on their own.
Well done! |
| Sunday 26th September 2010 07:53 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 14th September 2010 08:10 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice |
nice chapter! I wonder what tehy are sayibng about ginny... just look at her arm for the mark lol
how many chapters are you writing? |
| Tuesday 14th September 2010 08:15 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Put it this way this book is longer than Traitor. |
Patches
Monday 13th September 2010 03:12 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice |
| This is very good. I'm glad that Ginny had made preparations to escape earlier. That is why she was able to get away in time to escape being arrested. She was just going to be bait for Adam with the death eaters in charge. At least Arthur had a good head on his shoulders. He knew Ginny would go to Adam and he warned his family that they would just lead the death eaters to Ginny if they were able to find her. It is a miracle that Ginny made it from Otery-St. Catchpole to Exeter to catch the train. It would have been disasterous if that wizard had caught her. She is a smart girl though and she did take good precautions to keep from being discovered. I'm so glad Adam guessed right and met her train. That was a big relief to Ginny and to Adam. At least he finally knew she was safe. It was sweet when he put is arms around her and told her he had missed her. I'm sure between the two of them they were able to get the wizarding tent put up. At least they will be warmer and more comfortable in that. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
| Monday 13th September 2010 03:58 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it |
fl4v1nh4_
Sunday 12th September 2010 20:54 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice |
| Btw I don't no if I got it right but Harry/Adam was about to say "I love you" to Ginny and instead he said "be safe"? Maybe this is what I wanted hom. To say but whatever xD |
fl4v1nh4_
Sunday 12th September 2010 20:45 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice |
| Great one Is logical they blaming Ginny for being a death eater since well she is Adam's girlfriend and deffended him ... Can't wait for the next one... |
| Monday 13th September 2010 03:58 | Harry Potter: Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
