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Monday 11th October 2010 11:16 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Harry is so stupid and clueless about relationships!!! Poor Ginny! He has to miss her to see that is not only physical! He knows he cares about her and still... I'm still kind of mad with Harry but let's see what it happens..He didn't even read the whole letters! Grrr I hope he can discover what he feels for her on his own instead of having to be afraid to lose her or something... Anyway xD can't wait for the next! |
| Saturday 16th October 2010 09:27 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
Grrr I hope he can discover what he feels for her on his own instead of having to be afraid to lose her or something... !
Wow, what a great insight...I hope so too. Thanks for the comments and review! |
kopfsalat2000
Friday 8th October 2010 07:38 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| nice chapter! :-) |
| Friday 8th October 2010 12:56 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thank you and thanks for reading! |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 3rd October 2010 13:52 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Poor Harry is certainly still floating on that river in Egypt but doesn't even know it. Boys! |
parakletos
Sunday 3rd October 2010 08:29 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
Bugger is a stock West Country phrase with multiple meaning such as 'so and so is a bit of a bugger', 'he's been buggering me around' and so on. The first entry in the Urban Dictionary gives a good run down of this.
I can't say I was a fan of the chapter; its very uneven, Harry comes across as incredibly thick and Ginny very contradictory. I'm not really sure what your objectives were.
If you were to show an initially frosty Ginny thawing out in the face of Harry's contrition, as so at one point, I could have accepted things, but at the end I was left confused by the whole thing. |
| Monday 4th October 2010 19:06 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
I agree about this chapter being uneven. It began that way and continued to be uneven after the rewrites. I suppose with a nearly thirty chapter story, it's difficult to nail them all! Thanks for the constructive thoughts. I suppose in my defense I didn't want to make Ginny too frosty because she can thaw out just by being in the same room as Harry at this point. She can't stay angry for long, and she's going to continue to be extremely patient during the fall.
Take care,
R |
parakletos
Sunday 3rd October 2010 04:53 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
And you haven't been buggering the birthday girl all morning in your bedroom.
I'm not sure what that means where you live, but over here it means R&H have been having anal sex all morning.
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| Sunday 3rd October 2010 07:30 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Ouch! Lol... It's obvious that Ginny's choice of word shocked everyone in the Room and did well to expose a glaring naivety in her. I'm actually surprised that noone over at siye picked up on this choice of word when it posted there a month or two ago. Overall most had issues with the flow and feel of this chapter and it went through a few rewrites after it was posted...anything creative you would like to add to your reviewwould be appreaciated |
fio
Saturday 2nd October 2010 16:53 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
too much information about R/H hahaha
again, love the chapter
ginny is so forgiving of harry, hopefully he would something kind of romantic for here in the future. |
| Sunday 3rd October 2010 07:35 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| He should do something romantic! I hate to say it will be awhile off until he does. Yes tmi on Ron and Hermione but there is no proof or evidence that anything was going on upstairs! I'm glad you liked this chapter. The next few will be going up about once a week so October should be a good month for reading. Thanks! |
