hermione&ginny
Saturday 13th August 2011 06:35 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Another amazing chapter, keep it up! |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 6th January 2011 18:04 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| You and Arnel make a good work team. |
| Saturday 8th January 2011 09:18 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| I think so too Thanks! |
chit.94
Tuesday 14th December 2010 00:10 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
You should be proud.
You're one of the few authors who manage to bring a 3 Dimensional aspect to the characters. In the beginning, I was under the impression that your Ginny was beginning to show off a few Mary-Sueish traits. But you proved me wrong. You get about a 100 points right there. Also another annoying thing about most post-DH fics, is that Harry is either too depressed or hardly affected. You've managed to strike a perfect balance.
Cheers! x |
| Thursday 16th December 2010 20:48 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for these kind words of encouragement. I'm glad you think I've hit a perfect balance with my characterizations of Harry and Ginny post DH. I am proud of the story as working on it is continuously helping me learn and grow as a writer. Thanks so much for leaving these comments for me and I hope to hear from you again! -R |
Jeanne
Sunday 12th December 2010 08:23 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
IN YOUR FIC, THE ONLY THING I SEE WRONG WITH HARRY, IS THAT HE STILL DOES NOT KNOW THE REAL MEANING OF LOVE . HE SHOWS ALL THE SYMPTOMS PLUS MORE, BUT STILL CAN,T PUT A HANDLE ON THESE SYMPTOMS. MAYBE IF YOU HAVE A GINNY WHO LOOKS ELSEWHERE AND MAKES SURE THAT HARRY IS AWARE OF HER DOING SO, HE WOULD WAKE UP AND SMELL THE ROSES AS THE SAYING GOES. SHE IS A LOT MORE FEISTY THAN YOU ARE PORTRAYING HER, SO MAYBE SHE NEEDS TO TAKE CHARGE OF THIS SITUATION. WAITING WEEKS FOR MAIL FROM HIM IS JUST ONE OF THE THINGS SHE SHOULD FACE HIM ON.
I REALLY LIKE THE FIC, A LOT AND IT IS WELL WRITTEN. J. |
| Thursday 16th December 2010 20:43 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks alot for your review. Don't worry, Ginny will talk extensively about all that Harry has done wrong this past Fall. She is going to face him on his not having written her again as you think she should. One thing I like having Harry and Ginny do is talk to one another about their issues! Thanks for suggesting that Ginny should look elsewhere for love. I think this would be hard for her. We'll see what she decides to do. Yes, there is alot standing in the way of Harry's realizing his emotions and what they all mean. Thanks again for the great feedback, and I hope you will continue to be interested in my story as it develops.-R |
wildthestral
Thursday 9th December 2010 09:08 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| I really really love this story. I can tell you put a lot of time into it. The structure and flow are very nice. There were only a few typos. Please, please, please keep this story going. You are doing an excellent job and I am really looking forward to more chapters. Thanks, WildThestral. |
| Thursday 9th December 2010 15:17 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks WildThestral! I love your screenname by the way. I appreciate you leaving this review so I know you have read and enjoyed. I do put alot of time into this and a lot of hard work...thanks for noticing. Thanks for commenting on the structure and flow. It's something I worry about-whether or not the story flows well. but I'm glad you think it does. I appreciate this review and I hope you will leave feedback again. Thanks so much! -Rebecca |
kas417
Wednesday 8th December 2010 21:55 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| I'm really enjoying this story! Can't wait to read more. |
| Thursday 9th December 2010 15:18 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Good...I'm glad that you are enjoying and waiting for more! |
kopfsalat2000
Wednesday 8th December 2010 14:07 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
What a nice chapter... I like the way the story is develloping. Hopefully Harry will make some more progress during the holidays!
I hope you won't mind me saying that your writing has improved a lot since the first chapters. I greatly enjoy your story, as I'm sure many others do as well, so please keep up with it |
| Wednesday 8th December 2010 14:44 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| I don't mind you saying that at all! I'm glad you think I am improving. Plus, I am lucky beyond belief to have been, along the way, taken under the wing of an excellent beta who really pushes me to be the best writer I can be. I'm glad you are enjoying! -R |
Ph03n1x
Wednesday 8th December 2010 13:28 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Just spent entirely too much time reading through the whole story up till now. Keep up the good work! |
| Wednesday 8th December 2010 14:32 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| I know exactly what it feels like to get into a story and not notice the hours going by...Thanks for spending your time reading this, and for letting me know you enjoyed! -R |
Patches
Wednesday 8th December 2010 03:15 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Harry has been working hard and is worn down by more that the work he has been doing. Not sleeping well or eating right probably hasn't helped. I'm glad he is starting to miss Ginny more. I'm sorry she had such a bad reaction to his appearance when she didn't expect him to be at her house. I'm glad that Mrs. Weasley didn't make him uncomfortable about the way Ginny acted. I think she was so surprised to see him when she didn't expect him that she didn't know how to act for a while. I'm glad she and Harry talked a little. It is good really that he fell asleep. It let her know just how tired he is. I'm sure he will be able to rest I just hope he keeps up with his excercises so he doesn't have to work out too much when he goes back to training. Thanks for writing and I look forward to more of this story. p |
| Wednesday 8th December 2010 14:50 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| You brought up a good point about Harry keeping up his exercises! Thanks for that. It was helpful of you to point that out. I appreciate all the comments you are leaving for me Patches. I feel like they are all very helpful actually. It really helps to view the story, the characters and their actions from another persons perspective. Thank you so much! -R |
