Prageethiya
Sunday 5th February 2012 09:27 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| It's good to read about how harry seemed to cope up after stress. And even I would strongly love to applaud your Literary skills. And I do hope you would try to finish this whole thing soon. Would love to know more about what happened afterwards through your words. Have a good time and enjoy more and more writing. My wishes. |
ckarocks
Wednesday 25th January 2012 00:31 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| |
ckarocks
Sunday 22nd January 2012 23:13 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Great chapter |
| Tuesday 24th January 2012 07:35 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks again! |
ckarocks
Saturday 21st January 2012 23:38 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
Please hurry with the next chapters! I just started reading this about a week ago and I'm hooked! I like the plot; I'm not sure if it's soming JKR would wwrite, but it's realistic and pretty dang good. You have a true gift for writing.
You should try adding figurative language. |
| Tuesday 24th January 2012 07:34 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks much. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story! |
tombonette
Wednesday 18th January 2012 09:12 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| I loved this chapter but please please please hurry up and post the next one !! |
| Tuesday 24th January 2012 07:34 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you loved this chapter. Sadly , I did not make my January deadline so the next chapter will be up sometime in February. I am shooting for the first two weeks in February but we'll see if I can swing it! Good news is chapter 27, the last chapter should follow up very soon thereafter. Thank you! |
kopfsalat2000
Sunday 1st January 2012 20:20 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
A happy new year to you, too!
This chapter is a nice one. Both of them sound very reasonable and grown-up now, especially in their letters |
| Tuesday 24th January 2012 07:32 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Glad you liked this chapter, and were able to see the growth in their individual characters since the beginning of the story. Much appreciated! |
lizlovegood12
Tuesday 27th December 2011 20:11 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Hi! Very nice chapter!!!! I loved it! Hope you update soon I can't wait to read next chapter and know how the talk went! Bye! |
| Wednesday 28th December 2011 08:19 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Next update should be later on in January. I'm glad you are looking forward to it. |
teranayn
Monday 26th December 2011 18:28 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
I just read the whole story for the first time. Props to you, I love it. Very different character development and conflict and I'm a fan!
Thanks |
| Wednesday 28th December 2011 08:18 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Great! I'm so glad you are a fan of the story. Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed. |
Amelia* Bones
Thursday 22nd December 2011 20:20 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Awe shuckers! He looooooves her! |
| Wednesday 28th December 2011 08:18 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| He sure does |
helpmerj
Wednesday 21st December 2011 20:20 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Just wanted you to know that I am still reading and enjoying your work. Look forward to the next chapter. |
| Thursday 22nd December 2011 05:12 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| I'm so glad that you are still reading along and enjoying. I look forward to sharing the rest of the story with you. -R |
Grandma Kate
Wednesday 21st December 2011 10:04 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
Tis is a satisfying chapter. I especially like how their letters show their feelings (or as much of their feeling that they are comfortable to express).
Have a great holiday. |
| Thursday 22nd December 2011 05:11 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for leaving a review. I'm glad you like the letters. It is true that even though Harry and Ginny are growing closer in letters, there is still some part of them that they are each holding back. At least it is a great improvement for them thus far, and it was nice to write Harry's letters especially to show that personal and emotional growth he's gone through in the last year. I'm glad you found the chapter to be satisfying. You have a nice holiday as well! -R |
katte
Tuesday 20th December 2011 19:47 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
Thanks for the update, as always great chapter. its so good to see their relation is going on the right path now. I hope you have very happy holidays, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Katherine
|
| Thursday 22nd December 2011 05:07 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed Katherine. I hope you have a happy holiday as well! |
dharry
Tuesday 20th December 2011 07:49 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| It's finally coming together and I agree that's a stupid rule for the Harpies. I also really love the communication between Harry and Ginny and I like how Ginny can accept that she had been wrong in places as well. Update soon please love your story |
| Tuesday 20th December 2011 08:00 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this update. I know the Harpies rule is pretty archaic, but it's come up in fan fic a number of times so I decided to use it. I'm glad you love the communication between Harry and Ginny and we will see more of that in the last two chapters coming up. Thanks again! |
Patches
Tuesday 20th December 2011 02:27 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love |
| Well Ginny got her wish. She is a Harpy. A dream contrue that has a shadow over it. In a way I can understand why they wouldn't want their players to have "boyfriends" who could mess with their players heads while they are involved in a season but it is asking a lot for people to put their personal lives on hold for a whole Quidditch Season. I like the way that Ginny and Harry are communicating now. Harry looking at the really difficult memories in the pensieve was good but I hope he isn't rushing things too much. I look forward to their "intense" discussion that Harry wants to have. In the middle of her NEWTS preparation is bad timing too. I hope things don't go badly over this. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story when you are ready to update. p |
| Tuesday 20th December 2011 08:09 | A Less-Than-Perfect Love (Author Response) |
| Thanks Patches. As always, I love reading your comments. In the last two chapters there isn't much that can really go badly, but I'm sure it looks that way. It is poor timing on Harry's part to have another conversation with her, but if you can't tell the poor boy can't wait a second longer! We'll see how Ginny handles it all. Yes, the dream come true of the harpies really does have a shadow over it, but in a way I mean to show that the end of the story really will be just a beginning for Harry and Ginny. They will both have a ton on their plates in the next two to three years. At least we know after this story (and having written changing everything last summer) that there won't be any doubt that they will make it through. Take care Patches, and happy holidays! -R |
