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Friday 13th February 2015 03:29 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| I really enjoyed that chapter. Your writing is excellent and compared to other fanfiction at times on another level. I hope you will publish more of your stuff. |
| Tuesday 24th February 2015 23:11 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
I really enjoyed that chapter. Your writing is excellent and compared to other fanfiction at times on another level. I hope you will publish more of your stuff.
Sorry to take so long to respond to your review; I do appreciate the people who are still reading this. The next chapter is due to be sent to my beta soon so hopefully there will be more to read in the near future. |
1mperio
Sunday 11th January 2015 10:17 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Great story. I've been following on several sites and was getting worried that you wouldn't be able to finish such an well crafted story. Looking forward to the final chapters. Thanks. |
Capt_Everything
Wednesday 3rd December 2014 06:54 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| What happened to chapter 11? It goes from 10 to 12? |
| Wednesday 3rd December 2014 09:42 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
What happened to chapter 11? It goes from 10 to 12?
Hi, there is no missing chapter just a wrongly labeled chapter. I'll get that changed. Thanks for letting me know. |
marinka
Monday 1st December 2014 22:51 | The Sins of the Fathers |
So it seems that plot thickens, Bella has several lovers, if you can call them that. Ginny is stalked by Dean and Harry still attracts all kind of attention . Is this encounter was side effect of the broken contract or something else?
Thank you for the update, I am looking forward to see how you resolve this. |
| Tuesday 2nd December 2014 11:34 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
So it seems that plot thickens, Bella has several lovers, if you can call them that. Ginny is stalked by Dean and Harry still attracts all kind of attention . Is this encounter was side effect of the broken contract or something else?
Thank you for the update, I am looking forward to see how you resolve this.
I don't think that I'd describe anyone that Bellatrix is involved in as her lover although there are people that she derives sexual pleasure from.
The contract wasn't responsible for the encounter with Ms Vane other than the fact that Harry felt relaxed enough to enjoy some female company. He now realises that he has to be more careful and there's those dreams.
I'm working towards the story being competed by the end of the year although the chapters won't be posted until the New Year.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. |
nesciamema
Monday 1st December 2014 22:02 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| Can't wait for the next chapter and see how Ginny tries to resolve her feelings. Wondering what Bellatrix is going to do... |
| Tuesday 2nd December 2014 11:25 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Can't wait for the next chapter and see how Ginny tries to resolve her feelings. Wondering what Bellatrix is going to do...
Bellatrix is going to be quite a busy woman and Ginny has a lot of thinking to do. Both feature a lot in the climax of the story so watch this space.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review. |
