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The Pharaoh
Monday 22nd December 2014 15:05 | Vis Insita | and especially of once again having academic discussion (also with Ron)
By which I meant the discussion the Hero Quad have at the end after Scott leaves. | | Sunday 22nd February 2015 11:37 | Vis Insita (Author Response) | | Ah, yes. I felt that, after a certain amount of total confusion, especially in Nothing Important Happened Today Part II, it was important to make things clear. | The Pharaoh
Monday 22nd December 2014 15:02 | Vis Insita | It was fun trying to keep up with what was happening—I don't think I'd have used the word "fun" at the time, but in retrospect I greatly enjoyed the mental stimulation of working through Scott's the stuff Scott says (mostly with Ron) and especially of once again having academic discussion (also with Ron) . It was fun (and I would use the word at the time) to see them all struggling and regaining their real memories. I'm unemployed, and this was more stimulating brain activity than the total I've had maybe all month, so thank you, sir.
This is really technical, and it might just be how Scott talks, but rather than "Us hulking, insensitive louts are known to do that," it should be "We hulking, insensitive louts are known to do that." Also, it redundantly says Ginny was "peering out blearily out" from behind her hair in the beginning of her segment.
Thank you for another great chapter, and I hope to see more soon! | | Sunday 22nd February 2015 11:35 | Vis Insita (Author Response) | This chapter was a bit of meta fun, but it also serves to answer some questions readers have had during this arc, clearing things up. Sorry to respond after two more chapters worth of time, but PS was having some problems. Seems to be good now, though.
This is really technical, and it might just be how Scott talks, but rather than "Us hulking, insensitive louts are known to do that," it should be "We hulking, insensitive louts are known to do that." Also, it redundantly says Ginny was "peering out blearily out" from behind her hair in the beginning of her segment.
I know, that's just an intentional grammatical choice on Scott's part. I think it's a little funnier worded that way. | Dad
Saturday 6th December 2014 10:30 | Vis Insita | | You must be one of the few authors who use the word "solipsism" in their stories. Thank God for Wikipedia. | | Saturday 13th December 2014 09:26 | Vis Insita (Author Response) | | Ah, Wikipedia, font of all knowledge. What would I know without it? |
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