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Melindaleo
Sunday 4th October 2015 00:03 | Spectators | | This was a powerful, emotional chapter, and I thought you did a great job with it. I loved that Remus commented on teaching Cedric, and Bill offering Charlie the broom. I'm still desperately looking for tidbits from the other characters on their thoughts about Harry during all this. I so wanted to hug him at the end of this book. | | Sunday 4th October 2015 01:44 | Spectators (Author Response) | Thanks for the review!
You'll get some tidbits on the other characters in the last two installments.
I felt sorry for Harry in the book, too. Especially when you re-read OoTP and realize how much all this has really hurt him. | Arnel
Tuesday 29th September 2015 21:57 | Spectators | | I didn't need a tissue for this one, but I came close. You've done a marvelous job of conveying everyone's reactions to Cedric's death; I actually reached for that tissue while reading Helga's section. Well done. | | Tuesday 29th September 2015 22:58 | Spectators (Author Response) | | Thank you! |
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