kopfsalat2000
Tuesday 5th December 2017 12:12 | Vis Insita |
| Another great chapter, thanks a lot. The operation was well planned. Good idea to not tell us what the plan was going to be until it actually happened. Several chapters full of action, really entertaining |
| Tuesday 5th December 2017 12:44 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Scott sketched out the plan, but I did leave a lot of the details out. It was easier to read that way, and I kept some surprises that way too. |
joncooper
Sunday 24th April 2016 19:28 | Vis Insita |
| Indeed, I love the chance to immerse myself in the universe around a story, not just rattle through a plot. Keep up the good work! |
| Monday 25th April 2016 16:49 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
I think it can be a fine balance between the two, though my own writing style definitely leans more towards character than plot. Not that I don't think plot is important, but I do think it's generally less compelling than world building.
Thanks for reviewing, and I hope to see you again next time. |
wluer96
Wednesday 23rd March 2016 02:47 | Vis Insita |
| That's exactly why I read fanfiction. To see what other people saw in my favourite characters, whether it's a facet that I saw too, or something new entirely. And to see those characters in new situations. I love that fanfiction isn't plot-driven. It's freer to explore the journey, than simply rushing to the destination. Which is one of the reasons I love your work. It's a fascinating journey that I almost wish never ended! |
| Saturday 26th March 2016 05:36 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Yeah, the free-form nature of fanfiction can sometimes be its best facet. It can also be its worst, depending, allowing authors to stretch a small idea into several hundred thousand words of angst-porn. So it all depends. |
lazzyman5540
Tuesday 22nd March 2016 10:42 | Vis Insita |
| Still loving the story, great update. |
| Saturday 26th March 2016 05:34 | Vis Insita (Author Response) |
| Thank you, hope you enjoy the next one, as well. |
