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Thursday 18th August 2016 19:15 | This is the Life | | Glad this is going the way it is. | | Thursday 18th August 2016 22:17 | This is the Life (Author Response) | | Thanks! | angelmorph
Saturday 13th August 2016 16:25 | This is the Life | | Another excellent chapter. I felt uneasy about Lisa from the moment she stepped into the shop. Her meeting with Ron and Hermione, just drove the nail in further, and their fight hammered it home.
The scene with George's family was really well done. I particularly liked Ginny and Bill's speeches, though Hermione and Harry holding Ron back injected timely comedic relief to the scene.
The scene with Alicia and Courtney was also particularly well done; I'm glad George managed to cotton on to her, and enjoyed watching the gears click into place in his mind.
As with the previous chapter, I liked the tie-in with the past. Looking forward to more...
PS chapter 1 seems to have disappeared... |
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