Dad
Saturday 10th December 2016 13:00 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| I think I might be getting a head ache as well. |
| Saturday 10th December 2016 14:15 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
I think I might be getting a head ache as well.
I think there's a few of us.
Thanks for your review |
Dad
Saturday 10th December 2016 13:00 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| I think I might be getting a head ache as well. |
1mperio
Friday 9th December 2016 21:46 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| That's an excellent cliff hanger. You answered several questions, the Dean paragraph was nicely done. An interesting question is: which Tonks talks to Harry and Sirius? I'm guessing its the real Tonks, but you have Bellatrix roaming the castle as polyjuice Tonks.... I am very impressed with how you've plotted this all out, you must have a master chart up on a wall somewhere just to keep track of everything. I hope if the Sirius character survives we get a monologue of his plan! I'm excited to see how the big battle/reveal goes and I'm basically a hopeless romantic so, I'm rooting for a happy ending. I know the HEA can be annoying for authors to write, but since they only occur occasionally in real life, it's nice to read them in fiction. Of course, it's your story and regardless of the ending, it is a classic and outstanding. |
| Saturday 10th December 2016 05:04 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Thanks for your reviews and your PMs. I'm always amazed at the imagination of readers and sometimes think 'why didn't I do it that way?'
The big reveal? Well if you've read stories like 'And on the 8th day' you will remember that not everything is revealed.
I like a HEA, but sometimes they don't fit the plot, so I'm afraid that you will have to wait and see. |
marinka
Friday 9th December 2016 20:16 | The Sins of the Fathers |
Soo happy that you are updating the story! So will we see Bella making an appearance?
I am glad to see Harry and Ginny together, hopefully that nymphomanic b.. can be pit away forever!
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| Saturday 10th December 2016 05:00 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
Soo happy that you are updating the story! So will we see Bella making an appearance?
I am glad to see Harry and Ginny together, hopefully that nymphomanic b.. can be pit away forever!
Oh yes, Bella will be back, but will H&G be together?
Thanks for reading and reviewing |
wluer96
Friday 9th December 2016 15:51 | The Sins of the Fathers |
| I love cliffhangers! And I'm so very glad you've resumed this story. It's such an interesting plot and I've always wondered where you planned to go with it. Thank you for such excellent writing. |
| Saturday 10th December 2016 04:45 | The Sins of the Fathers (Author Response) |
I love cliffhangers! And I'm so very glad you've resumed this story. It's such an interesting plot and I've always wondered where you planned to go with it. Thank you for such excellent writing.
Thank you for sticking with it after all these years. |
