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Arnel
Friday 2nd February 2018 15:26 | Some Cuts Leave Scars | I have loved your Ginny from the very beginning. She's spunky, fun and so self-assured. She cares deeply for those she loves and this trait comes out in so many ways in this chapter. I love how concerned she is for Ron as he tells her about what he hears when herding the Dementors, how she agrees to walk with Siobhan to Hogsmeade so the other witch doesn't have to walk with a boy she doesn't like, and how she shows her love to Harry in every touch, kiss and cuddle. What made me smile the most was her love of butterbeer foam.
Harry's Dementor scene at the end is truly chilling and while I know what happens to Harry and Duncan in the next chapter, I was still on the edge of my seat willing Harry to stay conscious so he could protect the other Auror. Well done! | | Friday 2nd February 2018 21:24 | Some Cuts Leave Scars (Author Response) | | You're the best, Arnel! Not only did you read this over and offer great advice, but you still leave awesome, detailed reviews. I really appreciate all your effort! Thank you for taking the time to do it! | Dad
Thursday 1st February 2018 21:07 | Some Cuts Leave Scars | | Not a lot of reviews on here, so well done on this site. | | Friday 2nd February 2018 10:56 | Some Cuts Leave Scars (Author Response) | | Thanks so much! That's really nice of you. I love this site, but I think a lot of the fanfic these days seems to be centered around Draco Malfoy. I'm still a fan of our canon couples! |
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