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Sunday 20th May 2018 11:16 | Some Cuts Leave Scars | | Another chapter for Phoenix Song. Good. | | Tuesday 22nd May 2018 15:59 | Some Cuts Leave Scars (Author Response) | | Thanks for the boost! | Gioia
Friday 18th May 2018 21:39 | Some Cuts Leave Scars | | It feels like your story is heading down the home stretch. However, I've been thinking, and I've decided that's unacceptable. You're just going to have to continue thus forever. I'm having too much fun for this to ever end. | | Tuesday 22nd May 2018 15:59 | Some Cuts Leave Scars (Author Response) | | LOL - thanks! I'm always eager to finish writing, but then I'm sorry when its done! You are right about the end drawing near. There will be 24 chapters in all. | Arnel
Friday 18th May 2018 19:33 | Some Cuts Leave Scars | | I've forgotten... does Ginny's new friend, Willow, get a contract from the Harpies like Ginny does? I hope this question is answered in a future chapter. | | Tuesday 22nd May 2018 15:56 | Some Cuts Leave Scars (Author Response) | | Thanks for the remind! I've just fixed it so you'll know! | Arnel
Friday 18th May 2018 19:03 | Some Cuts Leave Scars | I love how Harry gently guides Ginny into remembering that she promised her parents that she would return to Hogwarts and take her N.E.W.T.s. He doesn't lecture, but he certainly leads her thinking so that she feels like it's herself who finally remembers her promise rather than getting a Hermione-like lecture. That gentle persuasion will probably be a concept he can use against future suspects in the interrogation room.
It's also great that Harry finally discovers that he has finally made the home he's longed for all his life and feels complete. Well done. | | Tuesday 22nd May 2018 15:58 | Some Cuts Leave Scars (Author Response) | | I think learning how to navigate each other's tempers is a skill both Harry and Ginny will need to learn, lol. Our heroes are hot headed! |
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