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Tuesday 29th January 2008 14:02 | Alpha and Omega | huh that would be really wierd!
I wonder what gin and harry decide...
| daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 3rd December 2006 21:18 | Alpha and Omega | | She's right you know on her last remark. And wow. I ahve to go to bed, but I will come back tomorrow to finish this. It is a very good story. I absolutly love it so far. I wonder what they are going to do. They are going to say yes arn't they. I mean. That is what this whole story is about right?? Very good chapter. And you are a very good writer. | Wooster
Saturday 1st April 2006 08:23 | Alpha and Omega | | I can't even get over how great this is. What a twist! Heehee... | PHsname
Monday 7th November 2005 15:42 | Alpha and Omega | just leaving a review...
between what ive read so far here, and carpe diem, ive already noticed a dramatic and vast improvement in your writing.
the pacing is much better...carpe diem seemed to move a bit too fast...that's the most noticeable improvement.
great job so far!! |
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