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Spark Soliton
Sunday 26th July 2009 12:25 | Innocence Lost And Found | | Funny moments between the surviving marauders, also Harry gets to be the big prat by tryying to push everyone away. Not sure I found the ward-system surrounding privet drive entirely workable but that is a minor gripe. Your dialogue is very good and the story is drawing me in. |
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