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Thursday 14th October 2010 14:34 | Heal The Pain | | Of course this would have to happen just before he was going to be able to see Ginny. | Praeceps09
Monday 13th July 2009 00:29 | Heal The Pain | | Frickin A. I dont know where the plot is going on this but I like it so far. I think Cipher is too Malfoyish (maybe he is actually that git), but other than that it is a good read. | GryffindorDragon
Friday 1st December 2006 13:30 | Heal The Pain | Well, Cipher sure is infuriating. And yet he gets to be an officer, when he should be drummed out.
Good chapter!
| DanAngelus
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 15:35 | Heal The Pain | | :O wow.. thats a cliffhanger if I ever saw one! Amazing. Will Harry still get to see Ginny now that he's on duty?.. I guess ill find out soon enough | Wooster
Wednesday 18th January 2006 18:35 | Heal The Pain | Yet another great chapter! I really enjoyed it. That Cipher creep is awful. I'm glad Harry finally got to sock him, even if it wasn't exactly the 'even-tempered' thing to do. This message sounds really ominous if it's even got the normally unflappable Elijah freaked. I'm a little nervous! | Sib
Wednesday 9th March 2005 14:06 | Heal The Pain | | What a great chapter. The training felt very realistic. The only thing
that felt a little unrealistic is that I was surprised Elijah let
Cipher through, since secrecy and trust is so highly emphasized, and
Cipher committed a serious breach of both. Still, a minor issue in an
otherwise excellent chapter.
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