kash2210
Thursday 25th September 2008 15:29 | Platform Goodbyes |
| Love it, wasn't expecting that chapter but you can imagine that actually taking place and exactly like that!!!! |
| Saturday 27th September 2008 15:33 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
Wow, thanks, glad I grabbed your imagination!
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gymnastgal19
Sunday 10th August 2008 20:32 | Platform Goodbyes |
interesting....
this was slightly confusing though... some parts i wasnt quite sure who was talking and who they were talking about and that...
but overall nice job
keep writting!
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| Saturday 23rd August 2008 10:44 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
Sorry I confused you, but thanks for the nice review!
And I will, don't worry! teehee.
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Grandma Kate
Friday 1st August 2008 10:00 | Platform Goodbyes |
| So sweet! |
| Saturday 2nd August 2008 03:14 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
| Glad you liked it! |
zoltan42
Thursday 31st July 2008 10:56 | Platform Goodbyes |
| Nice, but one question: why would Victoire have black hair? Bill has red hair, and Fleur is blonde. |
| Thursday 31st July 2008 11:43 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
Thanks.
I dunno why, but I always imagined her with black hair. And Fleur's father has black hair, it says so in DH, so that is my reasoning!
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ngayonatkailanman
Thursday 31st July 2008 08:13 | Platform Goodbyes |
Ah bless. Turquoise to shocking blue? That's our Teddy!
Love your James, bless him. |
| Thursday 31st July 2008 11:45 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
Thank you!!
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saulick
Thursday 31st July 2008 05:32 | Platform Goodbyes |
| Very Nice. I like the comparison betweeen Harry/Ginny and Teddy/Victorie. Good work. |
| Thursday 31st July 2008 11:47 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
Thanks. Wrote this AGES ago - I think I wanted to write both scenes and decided that I could somehow make them fit together as one story. I'm pleased it worked!
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toskin
Thursday 31st July 2008 05:10 | Platform Goodbyes |
| Godd story. I'm a little confused as to why Victoire has black hair though. Bill's is red and Fleur's is blonde. I don't see how you get black out of that. (Side note-my husband's hair is black, mine light brown, my dad's and grandpa's black, my husband's whole family black, and of our kids one has brown hair and 2 have blonde.) Sorry, I know it's just a small detail-just curious since I noticed her's was black in your other story as well. |
| Thursday 31st July 2008 11:49 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
Thank you. I've explained above -- just my imagination running wild but was thankfully backed up by minor detail in DH!
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joes12321
Thursday 31st July 2008 03:09 | Platform Goodbyes |
| i liked this. it took me a couple seconds to figure out who it was about, but it's a fun take. i like how it ties in with the epilogue in DH |
joes12321
Thursday 31st July 2008 03:04 | Platform Goodbyes |
| i liked this. it took me a couple seconds to figure out who it was about, but it's a fun take. i like how it ties in with the epilogue in DH |
| Thursday 31st July 2008 11:50 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
Thanks, yeah I wanted there to be a bit of 'Who is it?' I'm glad you liked it - I loved writing it!
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ejh0904
Wednesday 30th July 2008 16:10 | Platform Goodbyes |
| These are lovely! The only problem is I want more! |
| Thursday 31st July 2008 11:52 | Platform Goodbyes (Author Response) |
Thanks! Urg - I'll try and keep them coming! I've got some other ideas lined up, it's just finding time to write! Despite the fact it's the hols I'm barely home! Lol.
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