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Reviews For Following the Natural Curve: Part One by Bella

Thorn
Saturday 6th December 2008 22:33
Following the Natural Curve: Part One
um if james knew about the room of requirement wouldn't it have been on the map?
critmo
Thursday 15th March 2007 14:20
Following the Natural Curve: Part One
Well, this girl is abou as angelic as you can get. She forgives so easily, it's astounding.
critmo
Thursday 15th March 2007 14:20
Following the Natural Curve: Part One
Well, this girl is about as angelic as you can get. She forgives so easily, it's astounding.
Evelyn
Friday 18th August 2006 09:51
Following the Natural Curve: Part One
Ooh, cuteness... Now I'm feeling all weak...

I discovered this story today and ab-so-lu-tely adore it. While I do think it's a pity that James and Lily always need someone from either family to die just to get closer together (at least, it was like that, too, in the only other J/L story I read; Emmyjean's wonderful Crossroads), you are doing a masterful job of writing this. (Uh. Was that one sentence? )

I love your Gwen (go Sirius), I love your Lily, and I simply adore your James. And now I have to go on reading...
tante
Saturday 22nd January 2005 22:40
Following the Natural Curve: Part One
What a tender lovely scene in the Room of Requirement.  It was a real first kiss, not some perfect trashy romance novel type description.  Well done.  I'm enjoying the story.  Thanks.
Pugpal
Friday 17th December 2004 21:09
Following the Natural Curve: Part One
BRILLIANT!! Perfect amount of fluffyness!
Pineapple Queen
Friday 17th December 2004 17:01
Following the Natural Curve: Part One
What a perfect way for them to get together! As usual, I love your story and the complexity of your characters. The funny thing is, I read a story a long time ago where Lily had a friend named Gwen, and this Gwen reminds me of her.

-Pineapple Queen

(Oh, wait. I'm so stupid...you're the same person who wrote The Story of Lily, arent' you?)
Sunday 19th December 2004 00:22Following the Natural Curve: Part One (Author Response)

 

Indeed I am, Pineapple Queen. I love Gwen way too much to get rid of her. However, don't expect her to be dealt with the same way in this story as she was in SoL.... And that's all the hints I'm giving.

Bella  

Kokopelli
Friday 17th December 2004 16:35
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Have I told you that I love this story?

Oh, yeah, I forgot.

Well, I still love it.

JEC

Robert Owen
Friday 17th December 2004 13:53
Following the Natural Curve: Part One

Very nice, particularly the awkwardness.  I also loved the dresses, just what I would expect Petunia to choose.  Bravo!

 

Robert

 

Steph
Friday 17th December 2004 13:39
Following the Natural Curve: Part One

This is the first James/Lily fic I've read, and it rox! They're finally together! Yay!

Come back with more soon please!

-Steph

JenMusic
Friday 17th December 2004 10:47
Following the Natural Curve: Part One

I watch eagerly for updates to this story. It's great, and one of the stories that expanded my range to include Lily and James. I'm really enjoying the depth of the characters. Thanks!