Ginnys.my.name
Wednesday 7th November 2012 09:53 | Resurrection Stone |
| I think the whole centar thing could be worked on, because I thought Bane was the centar mad at Harry. But I love the story line, and I thing you did a good job in making the whole thing come from someone's death. |
| Wednesday 7th November 2012 13:40 | Resurrection Stone (Author Response) |
I see your point, but I think that Bane got over his anger when he led the centaurs into the battle and helped defeat the Death Eaters.
I'm glad you like the story, and thanks for posting a review.
Peter |
kopapaka
Friday 2nd November 2012 17:35 | Resurrection Stone |
| Thanks for nice story... |
| Friday 2nd November 2012 22:01 | Resurrection Stone (Author Response) |
You are very welcome! Thanks!!
--Peter |
jeanne1
Thursday 4th October 2012 19:10 | Resurrection Stone |
| Definitely not up to your usual standards. Something is missing . jeanneT. |
| Thursday 4th October 2012 19:30 | Resurrection Stone (Author Response) |
Sorry you didn't like it. I wanted to write a new story as a prop to advertise my original novel. There's a link to the website on my profile here.
Peter |
tjwillmsn
Monday 1st October 2012 13:38 | Resurrection Stone |
The goblins had every right to demand payment in full - and I do think that they would be nefarious to demand immediate payment for damages upon the bank for the break-in along with the wayward dragon damage.
After reading much of your fiction (along with your personal cannon of The Hog's Head and Ginny's House) - I can see that, Harry, the noble git that he is, would have no problem handing over the fees and fines to settle his debts with the Goblins, and that once he had made payment in full, would have earned the respect from said group.
That said, I do think that there would be some upheavals from the Ministry (from Hermione's correct viewpoint) about keeping a chained dragon as strict security. I'm sure that there would be better tools to protect the high security vaults - namely, Mr. Potter's vault.
Maybe there could be a one-shot about the desposition of the Lestrange Vault - whether through law, or Goblin means? I'm tempted to write it!
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| Monday 1st October 2012 14:45 | Resurrection Stone (Author Response) |
I agree with your analysis, with the addition that at the moment (in Resurrection Stone) when Harry agrees to give up his gold, it's mostly because of the threat to Ginny.
And your story idea is a good one. Go for it! Do you ever go on Sink Into Your Eyes? They have a bi-monthly story challenge and they might be interested in using your story idea as the basis for a challenge.
Peter |
tjwillmsn
Monday 1st October 2012 12:53 | Resurrection Stone |
Fascinating how you take a plot point that no one has explored, and ran away with it. I love how you made the Goblins into a bad guy - and also greedy little blighters.
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| Monday 1st October 2012 13:31 | Resurrection Stone (Author Response) |
When the story idea occurred to me, I was a little surprised that no one (as far as I can tell) had written about it before. Maybe it's because everyone assumes that the Resurrection Stone was irretrievably lost, but I re-read the passage in DH where Harry drops it, and it's pretty clear that if someone knew in general where to look, they probably would not have much trouble finding it.
So you don't think the goblins had a case against Harry?
Thanks for the review.
Peter |
Dad
Thursday 20th September 2012 11:52 | Resurrection Stone |
| I know I have read this somewhere else, but I am glad you have put it on this site because it seems to be getting little use. Well worth a second read. |
| Thursday 20th September 2012 14:02 | Resurrection Stone (Author Response) |
Thanks, Dad. PS is a quality site and has done a lot for my fics, and others' too.
Peter |
